Advice on Essays:
**I can only speak from personal experience and what worked for me.
Gestalt:
The Essays are a huge part of the App process and a chance to really show the prospective schools a piece of your personality. I think that in a world of 700 GMAT scores, the essays and the recommendations are a key way to differentiate designers as solid applicants. One of the key things that everyone will tell you to do is tell a story about yourself with the application process. One essay could lead into or relate slightly with another, one recommendation could help support the numbers or facts in your essays; the key is to let them play off of each other in a gestalt way to build a complete picture of you. Imagine them as pieces of a lego kit that, once put together, create a consistent and cohesive toy.
Writing Techniques:
There are many ways to write the essays, here are some quick tips that would have helped me from the beginning:
- Start large.
Write the essay longer than intended. The reason for this is to tell your story without letting the size limitations impede you. You’ll be consistently surprised at your ability to condense the essay after it’s written. I had to take some 1200 word essays and reduce them to 500. - Slim it down.
In editing your essays, find the key points that you’re attempting to convey, making sure that you answer the essay questions first and foremost, and then decide what pieces of your story you need to get across — humor, charisma, leadership, etc.. Whittle the essay down, eliminating excesses and dramatic language. I had a problem with this because I tend to write with flourish and drama, which was perfectly okay in one essay as a conveyor of my personality, but after that, the essays needed to be more to the point. - Avoid the passive tense.
Passive tense will make your essays unnecessarily longer.
Ex: ”Having been protected all of my life… ” vs. ”Protected all of my life…” - The Hook
Most of my essays, I began with a tease or a taste or a hook and then built a story around that hook. It’s a bit like a Tarantino movie.
Step one: Give a quick glimpse of a more current event that interests the reader.
Step two: Go back to the origins and tell the events leading up to the hook.
Step three: You resolve the hook.
Ex:
Step one: CRASH!!!
Step two: I began driving when I was 16…
Step Three: The injury and the time in the hospital served to make me stronger physically and mentally. - End Strong!
I’ve always thought that the end of your essay should release the breath of your reader. It should punctuate the story, resolving it, and offering a final point that is, without doubt, the proper ending. It’s your last chance to summarize your thoughts and complete the composition that you’ve developed. - Save multiple copies.
It’s okay to write multiple essays that have different feels to them. Save multiple documents or you can do what I did, and build a “palette” inside the essay where you have paragraphs that you may or may not use at the bottom of the document, saved there just in case. This more open perspective will allow you to write freely and explore your thoughts and emotions thoroughly. - Reread.
read again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again. - Get a proofreader.
It doesn’t matter how many times you’ve read your essay. Handing it to someone else, they will instantly find a misspelling or a poor tense choice or poor grammar. Make sure you have enough time to let them read your essays and then edit them. Involve friends and family rather than online boards, forums don’t really have your best interest in mind, and they can judge whether or not the essay conveys your personality. - Spell Check
I seriously believe that I didn’t get an interview at Haas because of a last minute change in an essay that resulted in a misspelling in the first sentence of my most important essay. By that time, I had written 19 different essays for other schools without an error, but Haas didn’t know that. They most likely saw it as an indifferent attitude. They read hundreds of essays, and to pick one up that has a misspelling in the first sentence makes it easy to toss out. Please spell check.
*NOTE: I’ll do my best to put together all of the essay questions in this section, but until they are released, this section is more of a placeholder, and the information below is from last year






I’ll be starting my MBA at the Ross school of management at University of Michigan in about 6 weeks, and I’m really excited…and nervous. Nerves aside, I feel like I should explain why I’m going to get my MBA, so here’s the first interview for the site…and it’s me!


